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Have you ever been to a museum, [이름]?^^
How did you feel? I think museums serve as an automatic time machine which transports us to a totally different era :)
Have a great day and thank you very much for doing your homework^^
I suppose that going to museums and art galleries is beneficial for children.
>>CORRECT!
Because children can learn to live wisely and they can learn history by looking around museums rather than reading article.
>> Because children can learn to live wisely and they can learn history by looking around museums rather than reading articles.
OR>>I suppose that going to museums and art galleries is beneficial for children, because children can learn to live wisely and they can learn history by looking around museums rather than reading articles.
And children can widely think and create over their own think by going to art galleries.
>>Moreover, children can widely think and create over their own thoughts by going to art galleries.
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