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Keep yourself warm!
~ Teacher Jacey
If I were born in different time and country, I think I born at Canada at 2005 May 16th. Ectually I want to born at Canada^^ Because if I were Canadian I don\'t have to study English. So I want to born at Canada. And 2005 May 16th is My birthday!
>>> If I had the chance to be born in a different time and country, I\'d choose May 16, 2005 in Canada. Actually, I want to be born in Canada because if I were a Canadian, I don\'t have to study English. So, I want to be born in Canada and the date will be May 16, 2005, it\'s actually my birthday!
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