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2017-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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How do you express your anger towards another person and what do you usually do to control it? I usually talk to the person I am angry at. I talk about why am I angry. And when someone tease me, I ignore he or she. Somethimes ignoring is the answer. I don't have to face with all the anger. If I do, then I might have a lot of stress. And I count the numbers when I control the anger. When I did this, I feel much better.^^

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Hi, Yu [이름]! :)

Thank you for doing your homework today.

I hope it\'s not too cold in your place right now.

Have a wonderful evening! :)


~ Jacey



I usually talk to the person I am angry at.

>> Correct!


I talk about why am I angry. And when someone tease me, I ignore he or she.

>> I tell that person the reason why I\'m angry. And when someone teases me, I ignore him or her.


Somethimes ignoring is the answer.

>> Sometimes ignoring is the answer.


I don\'t have to face with all the anger.

>> I don\'t always have to face bad situations.


If I do, then I might have a lot of stress.

>> Correct!


And I count the numbers when I control the anger. When I did this, I feel much better.^^

>> I also count numbers when I try to control my temper. When I do this, I feel much better.

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