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2017-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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If I got a chance to become president for a day, I want to wander arround The Blue House. Because, anybody can't wander arround The Blue House. Only president can do it. It's the present's privilege. And some people said The Blue House's cups and dishes(plates) are special. Like, it has my name on it, or the special design. I haven't seen them, but I want to see them and have a cup(or dish) of my own name on it.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Yu [이름]! :)

Thank you for doing your homework today!

Have a happy weekend and have lots of fun!


~ Jacey


If I got a chance to become president for a day, I want to wander arround The Blue House. Because, anybody can\'t wander arround The Blue House. Only president can do it. It\'s the present\'s privilege. And some people said The Blue House\'s cups and dishes(plates) are special. Like, it has my name on it, or the special design. I haven\'t seen them, but I want to see them and have a cup(or dish) of my own name on it.

>> If I got a chance to become the president for a day, I want to wander around The Blue House. Anybody cant just wander around The Blue House. It\'s only the president who can do this. It\'s the president\'s privilege. Some people say that the Blue House\'s cups and dishes are special, For example, it has my name on it or it has a special design. I haven\'t seen them, but I want to see them and have a plate or a cup with my own name in it.

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