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2017-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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title: what can I do now to be successful in the future? For my success,I think I can do these 5 things. 1. I can get high score in the TOIEC test. 2. I can wake up early like a habit. 3. I can read a book once a month. 4. I can save my money. 5. I can have self condifence in any situation.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Lizzy!

Thank you for sharing your goals for success. Just believe and focus on these steps so you can achieve success!^^

~Kelly^^

title: what can I do now to be successful in the future?
For my success,I think I can do these 5 things.

>> For my success, I think I can do these 5 things.
1. I can get high score in the TOIEC test.

>> I can get a high score on TOIEC test.
2. I can wake up early like a habit.

>> I can make it a habit to wake up early.
3. I can read a book once a month.

>> Correct.
4. I can save my money.

>> Correct.
5. I can have self condifence in any situation.

>> I can have self-confidence in any situation.

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