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How do you define success? What is a successful person?
I think success is what I do something that I really want to. And of cours, I' might be happy. So I think a successful person is do something really want to. And when doing something he or she is happy.
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I think success is what I do something that I really want to. And of cours, I\' might be happy. So I think a successful person is do something really want to. And when doing something he or she is happy.
>> I think success is doing something that I really want to do and that things makes me happy. So, I think that a successful person is someone who does something that makes him or her happy.
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