Home work*^^*
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Hi, YU [이름]! :)
Thank you for doing your homework today.
I think you really know yourself well.
Take care!
~ Jacey
I think I know myself well because it\'s me!
>> Correct!
the thing that makes me happy : Um...A good friend makes me happy. He or she listens to me and stand on my side.(Or maybe a boyfriend makes me happy!^^)
>> One thing that makes me happy is a good friend. He or She listened to me and stands on my side.
the thing that makes me angry : Talking behind the scenes about me. Why do people like to talk behind the scense about other people? They are not he or she\'s parents or teacher, are they? Of course they\'re not! I hate talking behind the scenes about me. If they can\'t talk in front of me they can\'t talk behind the scenes either.
>> One thing that makes me angry is people talking behind my back. Why do people like to talk about other people behind their back? They are not his or her parents or teacher, aren\'t they? Of course, they\'re not! I hate being talked about behind my back. If they can\'t talk to me directly, then they can\'t talk behind my back either.
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