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학생이 쓴 원문
In the modern society, it's hard to live without cash.
But money can't buy happiness. What do you think it's the most important in life?
I think family is the most important in life. Because we can't buy family. And family is worth then anything.
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Hi, Yu [이름]! ^^,
Thank you for finishing you homework today.
I hope you have a wonderful weekend.
Merry Christmas dear one! ^^,
~ Jacey
I think family is the most important in life. Because we can\'t buy family. And family is worth then anything.
>> I think family is the most important thing in life because we can\'t buy family; and family is worth more than anything.
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