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How did you spend your Christmas holiday? I went camping with my family. There was a snow sled. And I rode it wholday^^ It was really really fun and it was really thrilling!I want to go there again.
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Hi, YU [이름]! :)
Thank you for doing your homework today. I\'m glad you enjoyed your Christmas! ^^
Have a good night!
Take care!
~ Jacey
I went camping with my family. There was a snow sled.
>> Correct!
And I rode it wholday^^
>> I rode for the whole day.
It was really really fun and it was really thrilling!
>> It was really, really fun and thrilling.
I want to go there again.
>> Correct!
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