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These days, you can see a lot of young generations with ear phone plugged on the street. A lot of people listen to the music they love. Talk about your favorite kind of music.
I like korean idoll Block B's song. It is very joyfull and exciting. My favorite song's title is 'Shall we dance', 'Toy', and 'Yesterday'. If you listen these songs, you'll like them too!
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Hi, YU [이름]! :)
Thank you for doing your homework today.
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I hope everything goes right for you this year.
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~ Jacey
I like korean idoll Block B\'s song.
>> I like Korean Idol Block B\'s song.
It is very joyfull and exciting.
>> Correct!
My favorite song\'s title is \'Shall we dance\', \'Toy\', and \'Yesterday\'.
>> Correct!
If you listen these songs, you\'ll like them too!
>> Correct!
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