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I agree with \"Prevention is better than cure.\" for the reason.

>>> I agree with \"Prevention is better than cure\" for the following reason.
 Few month ago, I found that My room mosquito net was dislocated from the windows.

>>> A few months ago, I found that my window\'s mosquito / fly screen was dislocated from window frame.

but I negected that with positive [이름]d. 

>>> But I ignored that.
 After fewdays, During the early morning I suddenly heard some noise from the windows.

>>> After a few days, in the early morning, I suddenly heard some noise co[이름]g from the window.

so I checked that window to find the noise reasons.

>>> So, I checked the window to find out the reason of the noise.
 At that time, I knew the fact that The net was detached from the window and falled the ground by the wind. 

>>> At that time, I saw that the net was detached from the window and that it fell to the ground.
 When I took falled the net, I was very depressed.

>>> When I saw the net, I was very depressed.

because I had a choice but to throw out with fine.

>>> Because I had no choice but to throw it away.
 By the this experience I agree with \"Prevention is better than cure.\"

>>> Based on this experience, I can agree that \"Prevention is better than cure.\"