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2018-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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If I were given a choice between being given great wisdom or great wealth, I'll choose great wealth, because I already got a great wisdom(just kidding^^) It wasn't trueth. If I got that choice I'll choose great wisdom, because great wisdom can make great wealth but great wealth can't make great wisdom.

강사 첨삭

Hi, YU [이름]! :)
Thank you for doing your homework today and for answering my call despite you feeling sick.

I hope you feel better soon!


Take care!


~ Jacey



If I were given a choice between being given great wisdom or great wealth, I\'ll choose great wealth, because I already got a great wisdom(just kidding^^)

>> If I were given a choice between being given great wisdom or great wealth, I\'ll choose great wealth because I already got a great wisdom (laughs).


It wasn\'t trueth. If I got that choice I\'ll choose great wisdom, because great wisdom can make great wealth but great wealth can\'t make great wisdom.

>> I\'m kidding. I will choose great wisdom because it can make great wealth, but great wealth can\'t make great wisdom.


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