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Hi there JM!
Please take note of the corrections below.
Thanks for accomplishing this.
See you on Monday.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
1.Although She wasn\'t very rich, She gave money to the beggar.
>>> Correct!
*The position of conjunction is correct but you have to follow the correct case of words. Do not capitalize the beginning of words which are in mid sentence unless they are proper nouns.
2. He left early so that He wanted to arrive on time. (so that)
>>> He left early so that he would arrive on time.
3. Provided that You can go out tonight, You must tell us where you are going.
>>> You can go out tonight provided you tell us where you are going.
4. Even if I don\'t earn a big salary, But if I did, I wouldn\'t buy a car.
>>> Even if I earned a big salary I wouldn\'t buy a car.
5. In case Take a sandwich, There might be no restaurant. (in case)
>>> Take a sandwich in case there\'s no restaurant.
6. Despite there was a lot of noise, He managed to sleep. (despite)
>>> Despite the noise, he managed to sleep.
7. Sue likes Opera whereas Joe prefers jazz. (They have different tastes.)
>>> Sue likes Opera whereas Joe prefers Jazz.
8. Eventhough The weather was bad, They enjoyed the trip.
>>> Correct!
9. In spite of \'flu, He went to work.
>>> In spite of having the \'flu he went to work.
10.unless You have to put the alarm on, If not, it won\'t work. (unless)
>>> Unless you put the alarm on it won\'t work.
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