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"We must always obey our parents." Do you agree? or do you disagree? Honestly, I think I can't agree with it!!! We have our own opinion even we are young or a child!! Children can think, can't they? I think sometimes we don't have to obey our parents.
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Hi, YU [이름]! :)
Thank you for doing your homework today.
Do you always obey your parents?
If a child doesn\'t obey his or her parents, they will be labeled as \"bad children.\"
Don\'t you think? :p
See you on Monday.
I hope you have a wonderful weekend!
Take care!
~ Jacey
Honestly, I think I can\'t agree with it!!!
>>> Correct!
We have our own opinion even we are young or a child!
>>> We have our own opinion even if we are still young.
Children can think, can\'t they?
>>> Correct!
I think sometimes we don\'t have to obey our parents.
>>> I think, sometimes, we don\'t have to obey our parents.
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