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Some people think that facing problems or challenges improves a person. What do you think?
-I think so too. Facing problems or challenges really improves people. I experienced it. I entered a debate contest last year. And during the contest I learn a lot!! It means it improves me!!! So I think facing problems or challenges improves a person.
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Hi, YU [이름]! :)
Thank you for doing your homework today.
Do you like joining debates? I don\'t.
I feel scared. :D
See you tomorrow.
~ Jacey
Facing problems or challenges really improves people.
>>> Correct!
I experienced it.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR : I can attest to that.
I entered a debate contest last year. And during the contest I learn a lot!!
>>> I entered a debate contest last year and during the contest, I was able to learn a lot!
It means it improves me!!!
>>> It only means that it improved me.
So I think facing problems or challenges improves a person.
>>> So, I think facing problems or challenges improves a person.
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