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When men cry, does it mean that they are weak? No it's not. Men can cry too. They are also person!! There is no defference in women and men. It's a one of sexual discrimination.
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No it\'s not.
>> No, it doesn\'t.
Men can cry too.
>> Correct!
They are also person!!
>> They are also human!
There is no defference in women and men.
>> There is no difference between women and men.
It\'s a one of sexual discrimination.
>> That is sex discrimination.
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