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Why is it important to be honest?
Because a lie can grow bigger and bigger.And when other people know that I lied, than they might be upset about me!!
So being honest is important.
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~ Jacey
Because a lie can grow bigger and bigger
>> It is important to be honest because a lie can grow bigger and bigger.
And when other people know that I lied, than they might be upset about me!!
>> Also, when other people know that I lied to them, they might get upset.
So being honest is important.
>> So, being honest is important.
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