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2018-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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1) This morning, I was making toast for 2) breakfast. Then I went to the basement 3) to put some clothes in the washer. I heard the smoke alarm. 4) I thought “Someone is burning 5) something! I put the soap in the washer. When I got 6)upstairs, everybody was running outdoors. Two fire trucks and a police car were outside of my house. Smoke was co[이름]g out of my apartment! My kids was standing outside. They were wearing their pajamas. My kids! Oh no! My toast!

강사 첨삭

Hi there JM!

It\'s good to see your accomplished homework.

You did great. You almost got a perfect score.

Keep it up!!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


1) This morning, I was making toast for

>>> Correct!

2) breakfast. Then I went to the basement

>>> Correct!
3) to put some clothes in the washer. I heard the smoke alarm.

>>> Correct!

4) I thought “Someone is burning

>>> Correct!

5) something! I put the soap in the washer.

>>> B  something!” I put the soap in the washer.

When I got 6)upstairs, everybody
was running outdoors. Two fire trucks and a police car were outside of my house. Smoke was co[이름]g out of my apartment!

>>> Correct!

My kids was standing outside.

>>> Correct!

They were wearing
their pajamas. My kids! Oh no! My toast!

>>> Correct!



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