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2018-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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My name is 1) Jay Hammond. I am a firefighter. 2) I live in 128 Pine Lane, on Jackson, Mississippi. 3) I have two childrens. One is a girl named Clair. 4) Another is boy named Thatcher. 6) His name after my father. I also have a wife named Jenna. She is beautiful. She has long, dark, soft hair. 8) We also have a dog named Buck. He is very obedient but sometimes he barks at night and it upsets our neighbors!

강사 첨삭

Well, I\'m done with your second homework JM!

Thanks for finishing this! See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

My name is 1) Jay Hammond. I am a firefighter.

>>> Correct!

2) I live in 128 Pine Lane, on
Jackson, Mississippi.

>>> Correct!

3) I have two childrens. One is a girl named Clair.

>>> I have two children. One is a girl named Clair.

4) Another is boy named Thatcher.

>>> The other boy is named Thatcher.

6) His name after my father. I also have a wife named Jenna.

>>> Correct!
She is beautiful. She has long, dark, soft hair.

>>> Correct!

8) We also have a dog named Buck. He is very obedient but sometimes he barks at night and it upsets our neighbors!

>>> Correct!

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