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Thanks for writing this JM!

Kindly go over the corrections below. See you in class.

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Someone cites \"ignorance is bliss\", I agree with that.

>>> OR: Someone cites \"ignorance is bliss\" and I agree with that.
 Because Young generations in korea are enthu siastic about virtual money.

>>> Because young generations in Korea are enthusiastic about virtual currency.

Eventhough Virtual money can`t be authorized as a currency by the goverment, they just invest in virtual money to earn it.

>>> Even though virtual money can\'t be authorized as a currency by the government, they just invest in virtual money to earn more.

Some of experts are emphtic that It is not possible to replace authorized currency and experts are worry about plummet.

>>> Some experts are emphatic that it is not possible to replace authorized currencies and they also worry that the currency suddenly plummets.
 Last months, Theirs advice turn out to be correct.

>>> Last month, their prediction turned out to be correct.

Because of national regulation, Virtual money value was downsized. 

>>> Because of the national regulation, virtual money value dropped.
 When I consider this situation, ignorance is needed to live in a society.

>>> Correct!