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Think that there are two types of expectation on the future technology;

>> There are two ways of looking at the expectations for future technology. 

Negative and possitive ways.

>> There are positive and negative sides to it.

First of all, when I talk about possitive ways, many people can save the time which they have to move somewhere to go

>> First of all, looking at the situation in a positive way, many people can save time when they have to go to different places.

this is because there are many high quality transits are developing, thus many people can use more safty and faster things on their travel.

>> This is because there would be many high quality form of transportation and many people can choose from safe and quick ways to travel.

In contrast, people also will be lazy in the future.

>> On the other hand, people might become lazier in the future.

Many works can be replaced by techonolgy so people do not need to work hard to do something.

>> A lot of work could be replaced by technology so people won\'t have to exert effort in doing their tasks.

I believe that these trends will turn people to be lazier.

>> I believe that these trends will make people lazier.