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2018-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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1. She knew the medicine would taste terrible, "but" in order to be cured, she had to take it. 2. "while" the fox is typically able to withstand heavy winters, it sometimes falls victim to fa[이름]e and exhaustion. 3. After looking at the map, Jesse surmised that we should continue heading east. I agree with him, and started in that direction. 4. When the value of an asset decrease, the owner of that asset incurs a loss. 5. The formation of calumniated thunderheads are a fair indication of an inco[이름]g storm; inveterate sea-captains are typically able to identify them, thereby avoiding any potential danger. 6. Medieval knights were often commended for their outstanding chivalry and success in combat, but the truth is most knights only saw action in sparring matches or other competitions. 7. The athlete had been badly injured during play; although a nurse applied a cold press to the affected area, his ankle immediately began to relapse.

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Thanks for doing this JM!

Kindly review the sentences below.

See you!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


1. She knew the medicine would taste terrible, \"but\" in order to be cured, she had to take it.

>>> Correct!
 2. \"while\" the fox is typically able to withstand heavy winters, it sometimes falls victim to fa[이름]e and exhaustion.

>>> Correct!
 3. After looking at the map, Jesse surmised that we should continue heading east. I agree with him, and started in that direction.

>>> Correct!
 4. When the value of an asset decrease, the owner of that asset incurs a loss.

>>> Correct! [decreases]
 5. The formation of calumniated thunderheads are a fair indication of an inco[이름]g storm; inveterate sea-captains are typically able to identify them, thereby avoiding any potential danger.

>>> The formation of calumniated thunderheads are a fair indication of an inco[이름]g storm; inveterate sea-captains are typically able to identify them, thereby  avoiding any potential danger.
 6. Medieval knights were often commended for their outstanding chivalry and success in combat, but the truth is most knights only saw action in sparring matches or other competitions.

>>> . Medieval knights were often recognized for their outstanding chivalry and success in combat, but the truth is most knights only saw action in sparring matches or other competitions.
 7. The athlete had been badly injured during play; although a nurse applied a cold press to the affected area, his ankle immediately began to relapse.

>>> The athlete had been badly injured during play; although a nurse applied a cold press to the affected area, his ankle immediately began to swell.

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