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Subject : Do you think that one day robots will serve as childcare providers?
Actually, Many families are helped by robots.
For examples, babies stop to crying when they watch "the pororo" with a tablet PC. Also, Robots that speak frequency are good friends for children who stay alone after school because of parents in working place. I accept robot's possitive effects.
But for the question "Will Robots serve as childcare providers?"
To tell you the conclusion "No"
This is because the robot doesn't have emotion.
Robot can listen what they say, but can't sympathize with their mind.
Also, Robots work what they set, so can't cope in emergency situation.
Even though, many scientist practice for set the emotion to robots.
but I think it is impossible to put a lot of and detail emotion to robots.
More importantly, child is in important growth stage to improve personality. so. robots can't serve as childcare providers.
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Hello Kelly! My, that was a quick answer! You tenacity is quite something! You ahve a good point in here. ^_^
~. T. Irene~
Subject : Do you think that one day robots will serve as childcare providers?
Actually, Many families are helped by robots.
>>> Actually, many families use robots to help them with household chores.
For examples, babies stop to crying when they watch \"the pororo\" with a tablet PC.
>>> For examples, babies stop crying when they watch \"the pororo\" with a tablet PC.
Also, Robots that speak frequency are good friends for children who stay alone after school because of parents in working place.
>>> Also, talking robots are good companies for children who stay alone at home after school because their parents are still in their work places.
I accept robot\'s positive effects.
>>> I accept the robot\'s positive benefits.
But for the question \"Will Robots serve as childcare providers?\" To tell you the conclusion \"No\"
>>> But for the question \"Will Robots serve as childcare providers?\" I would say, \"No\".
This is because the robot doesn\'t have emotion.
>>> This is because a robot doesn\'t have any emotion.
Robot can listen what they say, but can\'t sympathize with their mind.
>>> A robot can listen to what humans may say, but it can\'t sympathize with them.
Also, Robots work what they set, so can\'t cope in emergency situation.
>>> Also, robots only work on what they are set to do so they can\'t cope with an emergency situation.
Even though, many scientist practice for set the emotion to robots. but I think it is impossible to put a lot of and detail emotion to robots.
>>> Nowadays, many scientists are trying to input some sets of emotions into robots but I think that is impossible.
More importantly, child is in important growth stage to improve personality.
>>> More importantly, a child needs a real person for his/her personality development.
So robots can\'t serve as childcare providers.
>>> Correct.
~. T. Irene~
Subject : Do you think that one day robots will serve as childcare providers?
Actually, Many families are helped by robots.
>>> Actually, many families use robots to help them with household chores.
For examples, babies stop to crying when they watch \"the pororo\" with a tablet PC.
>>> For examples, babies stop crying when they watch \"the pororo\" with a tablet PC.
Also, Robots that speak frequency are good friends for children who stay alone after school because of parents in working place.
>>> Also, talking robots are good companies for children who stay alone at home after school because their parents are still in their work places.
I accept robot\'s positive effects.
>>> I accept the robot\'s positive benefits.
But for the question \"Will Robots serve as childcare providers?\" To tell you the conclusion \"No\"
>>> But for the question \"Will Robots serve as childcare providers?\" I would say, \"No\".
This is because the robot doesn\'t have emotion.
>>> This is because a robot doesn\'t have any emotion.
Robot can listen what they say, but can\'t sympathize with their mind.
>>> A robot can listen to what humans may say, but it can\'t sympathize with them.
Also, Robots work what they set, so can\'t cope in emergency situation.
>>> Also, robots only work on what they are set to do so they can\'t cope with an emergency situation.
Even though, many scientist practice for set the emotion to robots. but I think it is impossible to put a lot of and detail emotion to robots.
>>> Nowadays, many scientists are trying to input some sets of emotions into robots but I think that is impossible.
More importantly, child is in important growth stage to improve personality.
>>> More importantly, a child needs a real person for his/her personality development.
So robots can\'t serve as childcare providers.
>>> Correct.
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