Home work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ashley! Thank you for doing your homework. I wish you good luck on your goals. You already know basic English words. I encourage you to continue learning new words to enrich your vocabulary. Constant practice is also necessary to improve your English conversational skills. Please don\'t forget to review the correction below. Should you have any questions, please ask me during class. Have a great evening! Cheers, Amanda ^-^
Goal before the end of 2018
First, i will study english conversation. Becasue i like travel with other countries.
>> First, I will study conversational English because I would like to travel to other countries.
Second, i will travel with my family once a month Because i have good remeber with my sons
>> Second, I will travel with my family once a month because it would be a good remembrance for my sons.
>> OR: Second, I will travel with my family once a month because I would like to have a memorable trip with my kids.
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