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Today is busy at work.
The weather is too hot. So i have ice coffee with my friend.
After work, i cleaned my house.
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Today is busy at work.
>> Correct
>> It was busy at work today.
The weather is too hot. So i have ice coffee with my friend.
>> The weather is too hot, so I had ice coffee with my friend.
After work, i cleaned my house
>> After work, I cleaned my house.
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