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After 5 years,
I will be a head nurse.
And i will travel freely
I will be slim and have a nice body.
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I appreciate your effort for sending this. It\'s good that you have a vision of what you want to become in 5 years time. I hope everything will pan out exactly how you want them. Good luck!
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After 5 years, I will be a head nurse.
>> OR: In 5 years time, I will be a head nurse.
>> OR: After 5 years, I will have become a head nurse.
And i will travel freely
>> OR: If that time comes, I will travel freely.
>> OR: When it happens, I will travel freely.
>> OR: In addition to that, I want to travel freely.
I will be slim and have a nice body.
>> OR: I will lose weight and have a nice body.
>> OR: I will try to be slim and fit.
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After 5 years, I will be a head nurse.
>> OR: In 5 years time, I will be a head nurse.
>> OR: After 5 years, I will have become a head nurse.
And i will travel freely
>> OR: If that time comes, I will travel freely.
>> OR: When it happens, I will travel freely.
>> OR: In addition to that, I want to travel freely.
I will be slim and have a nice body.
>> OR: I will lose weight and have a nice body.
>> OR: I will try to be slim and fit.
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