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She always feel bored, because she grew alone in a big house where too much enough to live her without any siblings even pets. She told her father that she need friends.

>> She always feels bored because she grew up alone without any siblings nor pets in a house  that was too big for a small family. She told her father that she needs friends.

 The rate of financial income has rapidly grew up while debate the government’s new policy about export. 

>> The economy has rapidly grew while the government debated about new polices regarding export.

 The class will be started at the highest building, you would be better use third elevator. Because the elevator directly goes the classroom.

>> The class will be held on the highest floor of the building so you had better use the elevator because it goes directly to the classroom.

 We are going to the theme park where is located besides the coast. Therefore, we can enjoy not only rides but also scenery of nature.

>> We are going to the theme park that is located beside the coast where we can enjoy not only the rides but also the beautiful nature.

 When she introduced her old friend, I feel good impression to him who has nice smile and smart mood.

>> When she introduced her old friend, I felt a good impression of him as he had a nice smile and looked smart.