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2018-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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ESSAY - What is the best place that you could recommend me to visit in your hometown in Korea? :) and why? I recommend you where is Jong-ro. There are many Korean traditional things like construction, interior, gift etc.. Also there are palace, Namsan tower near by. I think you will excited to there. Many foods, many people who are weraing a Han-bok. So I recommend you to visit Jong-ro.

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I recommend you where is Jong-ro. There are many Korean traditional things like construction, interior, gift etc..

>> I would like to recommend you to Jong-Ro. There are a lot of Korean traditional things there like building, interiors, gifts and more! 


 Also there are palace, Namsan tower near by.

>> And you can also see Namsan tower near by.


 I think you will excited to there.

>> I think you will feel excited there.


 Many foods, many people who are weraing a Han-bok.

>> A lot of foods a lot of people who are wearing their Han-Bok.

 So I recommend you to visit Jong-ro.

>> CORRECT



I would love to visit the place some day! :D

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