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I recommend you where is Jong-ro. There are many Korean traditional things like construction, interior, gift etc..
>> I would like to recommend you to Jong-Ro. There are a lot of Korean traditional things there like building, interiors, gifts and more!
Also there are palace, Namsan tower near by.
>> And you can also see Namsan tower near by.
I think you will excited to there.
>> I think you will feel excited there.
Many foods, many people who are weraing a Han-bok.
>> A lot of foods a lot of people who are wearing their Han-Bok.
So I recommend you to visit Jong-ro.
>> CORRECT
I would love to visit the place some day! :D
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