Home work @. @
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't know how enough thank you for your advise and comfort.
I don't know when I had done my homework at last.^. ^
I don't know what I'll write..^. ^;;
English is difficult because it's not near me. there are not good english speakers around me but my wife. My wife are good at english so we had only english time for me, but we were frustrated each other because of me. ^. ^;;
I envy and respect a good english speaker. so I do you. ^^
I think that languages can't express one's all thinking, but it can conect each other like a bridge.
I have a weak bridge. so I need to have a strong one.
Your cosplaying group twinkled twinked bright. your zombie tooth's makeup was so scary.
Your boy friend WOW~~ are handsome and smart, he looks like hongkong movie star "Tony Leung Chiu Wai".
You & your boy friend are harmoney like romantic movie stars.
I think more dialogue more love, the most near man is the best.
I pray you'll be rasing good love with him forever.
강사 첨삭
This is a great read!
Learning the English language, without lying, can really put you in a frustrating situation; especially when you do the same tasks repeatedly, yet you just can\'t get the hang of it. Nonetheless, keep going. The more the challenges, the more exciting it gets. All the best!
And Thank you for your comment about my boyfriend, He was happy when I said that you said he looks like a famous movie star!! :) I saw the actor\'s pictures already and I think you are right! I can\'t wait to show Tony Leung Chiu Wai to my boyfriend! Thank you!
Thank you too for appreciating our Cosplay group, I have a good news for you! We are now an official group! We are now registered in our government as a Cosplay Group! :)
Lastly, thank you for the sweet messages you gave about me and my boyfriend. You are so sweet. ^^
--T. Joey (\'.)
I don\'t know how enough thank you for your advise and comfort.
>>> I don\'t know how to thank you for your advice and comfort.I don\'t know when I had done my homework at last.^. ^
>>> I can\'t remember when I had done my homework. At last! I don\'t know what I\'ll write..^. ^;;>>> ACCEPTABLE
>>> OR I don\'t know what to write.English is difficult because it\'s not near me.
>>> English is difficult because it isn\'t familiar to me.
there are not good english speakers around me but my wife.
>>> There are no good English speakers around me but my wife.
My wife are good at english so we had only english time for me, but we were frustrated each other because of me. ^. ^;;
>>> My wife is good at English so we use English all the time for my benefit, but we become frustrated because of my ability.I envy and respect a good english speaker. so I do you. ^^>>> I envy yet respect good English speakers so is with you. I think that languages can\'t express one\'s all thinking, but it can conect each other like a bridge.
>>> I think a language can\'t express one\'s overall thoughts, but it can connect people like a bridge.I have a weak bridge. so I need to have a strong one.>>> I have a week bridge so I need to have a strong one.Your cosplaying group twinkled twinked bright. your zombie tooth\'s makeup was so scary.
>>> Your cosplaying twinkled bright. Your zombie tooth\'s make up was so scary.Your boy friend WOW~~ are handsome and smart, he looks like hongkong movie star \"Tony Leung Chiu Wai\".>>> Your boyfriend makes me say \'wow\'. He\'s handsome, smart, and looks like Hongkong movie star Tony Leung Chiu Wai.You & your boy friend are harmoney like romantic movie stars.>>> Your boyfriend and you have a nice chemistry just like movie stars.I think more dialogue more love, the most near man is the best.>>> I think the more you talk, the closer you become; thus, you fall in love all the more.I pray you\'ll be rasing good love with him forever.
>>> I\'ll pray for you to nurture a good relationship with him forever.
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