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2019-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below: >> What natural disasters are common in your country? I think that Korean peninsula is located on a quite stable place where It barely happens strong disasters such as an earth quake, a volcano, and so on. However, fine dusts cause so much problem in Korea these days. Many people think that the dusts come from china and I agree with that. Our government should co-work with China for dealing with this.

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In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:

>> What natural disasters are common in your country?

I think that Korean peninsula is located on a quite stable place where It barely happens strong disasters such as an earth quake, a volcano, and so on.

>> I think that the Korean peninsula is located at a quite stable place where serious disasters such as an earthquake, a volcanic eruption, and so on.


 However, fine dusts cause so much problem in Korea these days.

>> correct


Many people think that the dusts come from china and I agree with that.

>> Many people think that the dusts come from China and I agree with that.


Our government should co-work with China for dealing with this.

>> Our government should work together with China so that they could deal with this issue.

>> or: Our government should cooperate with China in order to deal with this problem.

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