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2019-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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What would you choose money or love? Explain. On a sencond thought, Frankly I was a material girl in my 20's. I used to hang out with a boy from rich family or a boy with bright prospects. I did not know why I did that. I may want to live stable and promising life. But time have made me to change, I can say I choose love now. I have realised naturally, There is no love can buy with money. My purpose to live is, loving and living with my love and dying happily.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you for your thoughts regarding this matter. 😁

Teacher Irene

What would you choose money or love? Explain.
On a sencond thought, Frankly I was a material girl in my 20\'s.

>>> On a second thought and frankly speaking, I was a material girl in my 20\'s.
I used to hang out with a boy from rich family or a boy with bright prospects.

>>> Correct.

>>> I used to hang out with a boy from a rich family or a boy with bright prospects.
I did not know why I did that.

>>> Correct

I may want to live stable and promising life.

>>> Maybe, I may have wanted to live a stable and promising life.
But time have made me to change, I can say I choose love now.

>>> But time changed me. Now, i can say I would choose love.
I have realised naturally, There is no love can buy with money.

>>> I have realized that there no amount of money that can buy love.
My purpose to live is, loving and living with my love and dying happily.

>>> Now, I know that my purposes to live are for my loved ones and to die happily.

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