Home work.

2019-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

I made mistake on the phone. I have my husband, one sun. one daughter,one daughter in low and one grand sun. But I told you grand daughter instead of daughter in low. And My husband has a job to get gardening license after retired. I don\'t understand fixing paper your husband \' job. How about your backache? You should exercise everyday. You have to make muscle to be healthy. My english teacher name was shanee before. She \'ll come korea and call me to promise me. I always wait shanee . HOMEWORK 1) has lived 2)was living 3)came 4)have you finished 5)have been 6)was 7)played 8)did you call 9)did not see 10)haven\'t been

강사 첨삭

Hi Lisa! Thank you so much for taking the time in doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^ You did great by the way, you got all the answers right! ^ ^
Thank you so much for this clarifications about your family members. I\'ve taken note of it. ^ ^
Thank you too for your concern. I\'m feeling better now, the pain on my back is slightly gone now.
I will tell Teacher Shanee about you and I will tell her too that you wait for her in Korea! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah 

I made mistake on the phone. 
>>I made a mistake on the phone.
I have my husband, one sun. one daughter,one daughter in low and one grand sun. 
>>I have a husband, a son, a daughter, a daughter in law and a grandson.
But I told you grand daughter instead of daughter in low. 
>>Correct (misspelled daughter in law)
And My husband has a job to get gardening license after retired. 
>>My husband wants to acquire a gardening license when he retires.
I don\'t understand fixing paper your husband \' job. 
>>I don\'t understand your husbands\' job and about fixing some papers.
How about your backache? 
>>Correct
You should exercise everyday.
>>Correct 
You have to make muscle to be healthy. 
>>You have to make your muscles stronger.
My english teacher name was shanee before.
>>My English teacher before was Shanee. 
She \'ll come korea and call me to promise me.
>>She told me that she will be coming to Korea and promised that she will call me. 
I always wait shanee . 
>>I am always waiting for Shanee.

HOMEWORK 
1) has lived 
>>Correct
2)was living
>>Correct 
3)came 
>>Correct
4)have you finished
>>Correct 
5)have been
>>Correct 
6)was 
>>Correct
7)played 
>>Correct
8)did you call
>>Correct 
9)did not see
>>Correct
10)haven\'t been
>>Correct

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