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2019-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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l like comedy movies. Recently, I enjoyed wacthing the movie \"EXIT\" released in Korea. This movie is a disaster movie. Its shows the process of escaping from a disaster site with fun. The main characters is Yoona of Girl\'s Generation and Cho Jung-seok. I hope to see you when you get a chance.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]!

You did a good job for your first homework! Thank you for your time and effort in writing this. I have a lot of fun talking to you in class. See you on Monday! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

1. l like comedy movies.
>>CORRECT!
2. Recently, I enjoyed wacthing the movie \"EXIT\" released in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
3. This movie is a disaster movie.

>>This movie is about a disaster.
4. Its shows the process of escaping from a disaster site with fun.
>>It shows the process of escaping from a disaster site with a little mix of fun.
5. The main characters is Yoona of Girl\'s Generation and Cho Jung-seok.
>>The main characters are Yoona of Girl\'s Generation and Cho Jung-seok.
6. I hope to see you when you get a chance.

>>I hope you see it when you get a chance.

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