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2019-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 James

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If you don\'t like outdoor sports , you could do indoor sports and enjoy your self. The yuongsters awardpop music idols and they like putting ep their posters on the walls of their rooms. My little brother is keep on save pocket money. when I ask him for it , he never lends me. If you spend lot\'s of time in front of TV, that means you just waste your precious time. When an actor receives an leisure his fame become double.You mustn\'t watch TV shows when there is lot\'s of homework. Expecially when you have an exam the next day , you had better turn it of entirely . And when you trekking me in front of my friend, I feel embarrassed. My father and I go jogging in every morning.That\'s why we feel healthy.And fit I need to look it up in the dictionary. Trekking is a long difficult journey. Ordinary activities as the free time activities.

강사 첨삭

Hello Lucas,

Thank you for your homework!!!

If you don\'t like outdoor sports , you could do indoor sports and enjoy your self.

>>> If you don\'t like outdoor sports, you could do indoor sports and enjoy it by yourself.

The yuongsters awardpop music idols and they like putting ep their posters on the walls of their rooms.

>>> The youngsters award-pop music idols and they like putting ep posters on the walls of their rooms.

My little brother is keep on save pocket money. when I ask him for it , he never lends me.

>>> My little brother is kept on saving pocket money. When I ask him for it, he never lends me.

If you spend lot\'s of time in front of TV, that means you just waste your precious time.

>>> If you spend lots of time in front of the TV, that means you just waste your precious time.

When an actor receives an leisure his fame become double.

>>> When an actor receives a leisure, his fame becomes double.

You mustn\'t watch TV shows when there is lot\'s of homework.

>>> CORRECT

Expecially when you have an exam the next day , you had better turn it of entirely .

>>> Especially when you have an exam the next day, you had better turn it off entirely.

And when you trekking me in front of my friend, I feel embarrassed. 

>>> And when you are trekking me in front of my friend, I feel embarrassed. 

My father and I go jogging in every morning.

>>> My father and I go jogging every morning.

That\'s why we feel healthy.And fit I need to look it up in the dictionary. 

>>> That\'s why we feel healthy and fit.

 I need to look it up in the dictionary. 

>>> CORRECT

Trekking is a long difficult journey. 

>>> Trekking is a long, difficult journey. 

Ordinary activities as the free time activities.

>>> Ordinary activities are the free time activities. 

 

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