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Good thing about traveling is I could visit other place.Second , I will see lot\'s of thing that it is not in my own country. Third , if I travel with airplane, I don\'t have to go to academys and I could just sleep or play games.Force, I could learn other language.Bad thing about traveling is in the air plane, I could be sick. second, if you didn\'t learn other country\'s language, you can\'t speak with others. third, maybe you won\'t like that country\'s food. Force, if you don\'t know that country\'s rule, it will be bad.
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Hello there Lucas. You did great in your homework today! Thank you for doing it. :)
Until the next one! ^-^
~Teacher Sheila
Good thing about traveling is I could visit other place.
>>Good thing about traveling is I could visit other places.
Second , I will see lot\'s of thing that it is not in my own country.
>>Second, I will see lots of things that is not in my own country.
Third , if I travel with airplane, I don\'t have to go to academys and I could just sleep or play games.
>>Third, If I travel with airplanes, I don\'t have to go to academies and I could sleep or play games.
Force, I could learn other language.
>>Fourth, I could learn other languages.
Bad thing about traveling is in the air plane, I could be sick. second, if you didn\'t learn other country\'s language, you can\'t speak with others. third, maybe you won\'t like that country\'s food.
>>Bad things about traveling is related to airplanes. I could be sick. Second, if you didn\'t learn other country\'s language, you can\'t speak with others. Third, maybe you won\'t like the country\'s food.
Force, if you don\'t know that country\'s rule, it will be bad.
>>Fourth, if you don\'t know that country\'s rule, it will be bad.
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