home work
학생이 쓴 원문
We has to protect environment because if people cut all the trees ,the air will be dirty.And if we don\'t protect environment, the animals will die and some bug like bee die. Then plant won\'t grow up and we can\'t live.
And if people throw trashs, the plants won\'t grow up healthily,and if we eat the plant,
we will be sick.And because we can\'t see animals or plants if we don\'t protect environment.
That is why we has to protect environment.
강사 첨삭
Hello Lucas! I can see your sincerity in your homework. Great job!
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>We have to protect the environment because if people cut all the trees, the air will be dirty.
And if we don\'t protect environment, the animals will die and some bug like bee die.
>>And if we don\'t protect our environment, the animals will die and some bugs like bees will die.
Then plant won\'t grow up and we can\'t live.
>>Then, plants won\'t grow and we can\'t live.
And if people throw trashs, the plants won\'t grow up healthily,and if we eat the plant,
we will be sick.
we will be sick.
>>And if people throw trashes, the plants wont grow healthily and if we eat the plant, we will be sick.
And because we can\'t see animals or plants if we don\'t protect environment.
>>Also, we can\'t see animals or plants if we don\'t protect our environment.
>>Also, we can\'t see animals or plants if we don\'t protect our environment.
That is why we has to protect environment.
>>That is why we have to protect our environment.
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