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I want to be a doctor.Because my father is a doctor and because I could get lot\'s of money.And because it is hard to be a doctor , so if i am a doctor, I will fill good. And because doctor is not a bad job like person who
pick trash.And I want to help some hult people.
강사 첨삭
Hi Lucas! Thank you for doing your homework tonight!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
pick trash.And I want to help some hult people.
>>I want to be a doctor because my father is a doctor and I could get lots of money being a doctor. It\'s hard to be a doctor so I will feel good if I become a doctor. Also, doctor is a good job compared to a person picking trashes. Moreover, I want to help sick people.
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