home work
학생이 쓴 원문
introduce myself
I\'m [이름]gyu [이름], but If you are having a hard time pronouncing my name, you can me Rodney. Which is my English name. And now, I\'m living in Busan to studying in Pu[이름]ng national university, but my hometown is Mokpo. There is located in southwestern of korea. And my major is naval architecture. I\'d studied for designing and engineering about the ship.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for making this for your homework. :) I think that this is better than the ones that you mentioned in class. Please do not on the corrections I gave you though. ;)
>> I\'m [이름]gyu [이름], but if you are having a hard time pronouncing my name, you can me Rodney, which is my English name.
And now, I\'m living in Busan to studying in Pu[이름]ng national university, but my hometown is Mokpo.
>> And now, I\'m living in Busan. I am studying in Pu[이름]ng National University, but my hometown is, Mokpo.
There is located in southwestern of korea.
>> It is located on the South Western part of Korea.
And my major is naval architecture.
>> And, my major is Naval Architecture.
I\'d studied for designing and engineering about the ship.
>> I am studying designing and engineering of ships.
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