home work
학생이 쓴 원문
in the weekend, i spent time to study ielts and to searching about my assignment. i pay the majority of whole time to work for assignment because, topic was little bit hard. i had to find information about which one is better on the shipping industry between korea and china.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for the homework dear. I can say that you have to watch out in making complicated sentences. You also have to note the use of your conjunctions. It may sound simple but it is very important. ^_^
>> Last weekend, I spent my time studying IELTS, and searching about my assignment.
i pay the majority of whole time to work for assignment because, topic was little bit hard.
>> I had to spend majority of my time searching for my homework because the topic was a little bit hard.
i had to find information about which one is better on the shipping industry between korea and china.
>> I had to find information\'s on which one is better to shipping industries in between Korea and china.
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