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Good thing about living in a city:In city, there is lot\'s of cars and bus. And some merket.sSo I could go to other place easily and I could buy some staff.And in the city, there is lot\'s of people and there is a lot of kids so I could ply with them.
bad thing about living in a city:the air is dirty because there is not lot of tree. And in the play ground, I want to swing but there is
other people so I have to wait.
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Hello there Lucas! Be careful in your grammar when you are writing your sentences.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
Good thing about living in a city:
>>There are good things about living in a city.
In city, there is lot\'s of cars and bus. And some merket.s
>>In the city, there are lots of cars and buses and some markets.
So I could go to other place easily and I could buy some staff.
>>So, I could go to other places easily and I could buy some stuff.
And in the city, there is lot\'s of people and there is a lot of kids so I could ply with them.
>>And in the city, there are lots of people and there are lot of kids so I could play with them.
>>The Bad thing about living in a city is the air is dirty because there are not enough trees.
And in the play ground, I want to swing but there is other people so I have to wait.
>>And in the playground, I want to swing but there are other people so I have to wait.
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