home work
학생이 쓴 원문
When I did something bad, my parents mae me rase my hand.
Or sometimes, they tell me to rase my hand with heavy book.Or they just tell me to do some chorse and sometimes they hits my hand with a stick.But it isn\'td very hart.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Lucas! I was able to understand your homework today but be careful in your spelling and your punctuation marks.
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>When I do something bad, my parents make me raise my hand.
Or sometimes, they tell me to rase my hand with heavy book.
>>Or sometimes, they tell me to raise my hands with a heavy book.
Or they just tell me to do some chorse and sometimes they hits my hand with a stick.But it isn\'td very hart.
>>Or, they just tell me to do some chores and sometimes, they hit my hand with a stick but it doesn\'t hurt that much.
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