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2019-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Q. What is your opinion about a four-day week? A. I think it\'s really good system for worker. You know, the lifespan of human is almost 100year-old. So one job is not enough for life. Doing one job whole life can be boring and make people fall into a mannerism. So, with four-day work, we can learn other kinds of work and find another talents. For example, i want to be a electrician of plants but i want to be a baker and run a cafe someday. So, i am planning to learn bake and coffee using everyweek 3days of holiday.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Layla! Thanks for sending in your homework. Great job!

-T. James-

I think it\'s really good system for worker.

>>> I think its a good system for the workers.
You know, the lifespan of human is almost 100year-old. So one job is not enough for life.

>>> You know that the lifespan of humans is almost 100 years old. So, having one job is not enough in life.
Doing one job whole life can be boring and make people fall into a mannerism.

>>> Doing the same job in whole life it’s boring and make people fall into a mannerism.
So, with four-day work, we can learn other kinds of work and find another talents.

>>> So, with a four day-work, we can learn other kinds of works and find our new talents and skills.
For example, i want to be a electrician of plants but i want to be a baker and run a cafe someday.

>>> For example, I’m an electrician but, I want to be a baker and run a cafe someday.
So, i am planning to learn bake and coffee using everyweek 3days of holiday.

>>> So, I’m planning to study baking and coffee making by having 3 days off every week.

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