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2019-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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*= listen *How do you say dumpling to Korean? Have you eaten lunch? No I have`nt eaten lunch yet. *That`s why dumpling make me hungry. Manchester is in UK. Have you been to UK? I have seen the BigBen (but I didnt remember the name of watch when we talked) *Why did you not stay behinde or stay there and go for study? *Teacher I just went there for a tour *I did not go there for study HOMEWORK I`d like to go to Atlanta USA Because a lot of friends live there, I want to meet them and send my kids to Summer school for experience if possible.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mi Jin! Thank you for taking time in doing your homework. I appreciate the effort! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

*How do you say dumpling to Korean?

>>How do you say dumpling in Korean?
Have you eaten lunch?

>>Have you eaten lunch yet?
No I have`nt eaten lunch yet.

>>No, I haven\'t eaten lunch yet.
*That`s why dumpling make me hungry.

>>That`s why dumplings make me hungry.
Manchester is in UK.

>>CORRECT
Have you been to UK?

>>CORRECT
I have seen the BigBen (but I didnt remember the name of watch when we talked)

>>I have seen the Big Ben, but I couldn\'t remember when you asked me about it.
*Why did you not stay behinde or stay there and go for study?

>>Why did you not stay behind or stayed there to study?
*Teacher I just went there for a tour

>>CORRECT
*I did not go there for study

>>I didn\'t go there to study.

I`d like to go to Atlanta USA

>>CORRECT
Because a lot of friends live there, I want to meet them and send my kids to Summer school for experience if possible.

>>Because a lot of my friends live there, I want to meet them and send my kids to summer school for experience if possible.

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