home work
학생이 쓴 원문
12/18 homework
I`d like to go to Atlanta USA.
Because a lot of friends live there, I want to meet them and send my kids summer school for experience, if possible.
What did you do earlier today?
-I went to a day care center to send my daughter.
-I help my daughter go to school.
Haven`t you eaten your lunch yet?
-No, I had noodle for lunch.
I think Im gonna catch a cold any time soon.
How about the weekend?
what are you going to do?
- I will go to visit my mom.
-Im going to spend time with my family at home.
I grew up in a number of cities in Korea.
I just arrived home.
My nationality is Korean.
What is the meaning of fondest?
-Memorable when you are childe.
My fondest memory is when I was 12.
I met my best friend and I learned many thing in those days.
I lived Wonju Kanwondo, It is countryside.
I played outside everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mi Jin! Thank you for listening to our class recording and taking the time in jotting down questions and sentences for corrections. Great job! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
Because a lot of friends live there, I want to meet them and send my kids summer school for experience, if possible.
>>Because a lot of friends live there, I want to meet them and send my kids to summer school for experience, if possible.
Because a lot of friends live there, I want to meet them and send my kids summer school for experience, if possible.
>>Because a lot of friends live there, I want to meet them and send my kids to summer school for experience, if possible.
What did you do earlier today?
-I went to a day care center to send my daughter.
>>I brought my daughter to the day care center.
-I help my daughter go to school.
-I help my daughter go to school.
>>I accompanied my daughter to school.
Haven`t you eaten your lunch yet?
-No, I had noodle for lunch.
Haven`t you eaten your lunch yet?
-No, I had noodle for lunch.
>>Yes. I have already eaten lunch.
>>I had noodles for lunch.
I think I\'m gonna catch a cold any time soon.
I think I\'m gonna catch a cold any time soon.
>>CORRECT
How about the weekend?
what are you going to do?
- I will go to visit my mom.
How about the weekend?
what are you going to do?
- I will go to visit my mom.
-I\'m going to spend time with my family at home.
>>CORRECT
I grew up in a number of cities in Korea.
>>CORRECT
I grew up in a number of cities in Korea.
>>CORRECT
I just arrived home.
I just arrived home.
>>CORRECT
My nationality is Korean.
>>CORRECT
What is the meaning of fondest?
-Memorable when you are childe.
My nationality is Korean.
>>CORRECT
What is the meaning of fondest?
-Memorable when you are childe.
>>Something you remember so much about your childhood.
My fondest memory is when I was 12.
My fondest memory is when I was 12.
>>CORRECT
I met my best friend and I learned many thing in those days.
I met my best friend and I learned many thing in those days.
>>I met my best friend and I learned many things in those days.
I lived Wonju Kanwondo, It is countryside.
I lived Wonju Kanwondo, It is countryside.
>>I lived in Wonju Kanwondo.
It is countryside.
>>It is in the countryside.
I played outside everyday.
I played outside everyday.
>>CORRECT
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