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2020-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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What things do you want to do at the beginning of the new year? First, what i want to do most in the new year is to travel with my family. It is because I didn\'t have much family trip last year. Second, I want to go domestic travel with my friends. I want to make a lot of memories before we get busier then now. Third, I want to make a new job. I don\'t work at a pharmacy at the end of December. I want to do something I haven\'t experienced before, and I want to do something fun.

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Hello [이름] [이름]!

Thank you for making your homework. See you next week! ^^

First, what i want to do most in the new year is to travel with my family.
>>CORRECT!
It is because I didn\'t have much family trip last year.
>>It is because I didn\'t go on many trips last year with my family.
Second, I want to go domestic travel with my friends.
>>Second, I want to travel domestically with my friends.
I want to make a lot of memories before we get busier then now.
>>I want to make a lot of memories before we get busier.
Third, I want to make a new job.
>>Third, I want to get a new job.
I don\'t work at a pharmacy at the end of December.
>>I want to stop working at the pharmacy by the end of December.
I want to do something I haven\'t experienced before, and I want to do something fun.

>>CORRECT!

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