home work.
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I think there are several reasons of accidents on the road in here. First, the processing of get a drive license is easier than other countries.
A repoter showed video cripts including processing of pass the exam for the drive license to the foreighers and asked the foreighers that what they do in a video cripts?. The viewer said that before taking a exam, they looked like trying to practice. But it was done to get a license. the results of faster and easier test would be causes of accident.
Second, there are some parked car on both side of road. Especially infont of school, It obstruct drivers view when the pedestrian suddenly indicated through the parked car.
Actually it is not possible to install CCTV over the traffic light, So the driver have to keep the rules like speed and pricipals. I think it is best way to decrease of car accidents
강사 첨삭
Hi JM!
I believe you already uploaded this homework and I\'ve just sent you the corrections.^^
Cheers,
Jean~~
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