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First, I want to win first place in department. because, if I win first place in department, l can get a full scholarship.
and l want to have a boy friend. but I think I can\'t do it this year. If I have a boyfriend, I will tell you.
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That is too cuuuutte! hahah Yes please, I would like to know. :D
First, I want to win first place in department. because, if I win first place in department, l can get a full scholarship.
>> First, I want to win first place in my department. It is because, if I win, l can get a full scholarship.
and l want to have a boy friend. but I think I can\'t do it this year. If I have a boyfriend, I will tell you.
>> And, l want to have a boyfriend too. I think I can\'t have one this year though.
If I have a boyfriend, I will tell you.
>> Correct.
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