home work
학생이 쓴 원문
when I prepared university exam, I leave the academy. because I feel really tired.
But I drop every university exam so I despair. I give a challenge again alone and finally I pass the exam!!!
강사 첨삭
I am so happy for you! I think that sounds really good. ^^
when I prepared university exam, I leave the academy. because I feel really tired.
>> When I prepare for my university exam, I leave the academy because I feel really tired.
But I drop every university exam so I despair. I give a challenge again alone and finally I pass the exam!!!
>>But I fail every university exam so I felt despair. I challenged myself again while I was alone and finally I passed the exam!!!
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