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2013-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What disciplinary measures should be applied to perverse people? I can find easily those persons in my field of work In my case, usually use 2 different measures First of all, give him no work until understanding his fault Second, to make matters worse, fire him from my work field beause it likes virus, even if he works well, he makes perverse affect to relative people I think I agree to use Times CALL material teaching use under is better 08-27(화) [NATION] Another victim of Japan's sexual slavery dies thanks sir~

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A benign Tuesday to you, [이름]! How did you find the question that I posted as your homework? It is so random, right? This, in my opinion, is better so I can challenge your mind. Your creativity is also measured in this kind of homework. It may vary, though, sometimes, so you won\'t get a dull feeling from answering such. I am grateful that you came to like my recommendation. You actually opened this up because you told me yesterday that you want us to discuss news articles, so it would be much better for you to take up a newspaper course. Hopefully, I will then keep up with your trail of thought. Also, thanks for indicating here the article that you read. Perhaps, if possible, we can also discuss more than one article given our ample time. Nonetheless, your choice is far-fetched, so we can discuss a lot of matters related to the main theme of the article, as well. Thank you so much for sharing what you have in mind, [이름], regarding the disciplinary measures that you will apply to perverse people. You caught me off guard with your answers. Nice one! Keep on writing, [이름]! _Klein What disciplinary measures should be applied to perverse people?I can find easily those persons in my field of work >>I can easily find this type of people in my field of work.In my case, usually use 2 different measures >>In my case, I usually use two different measures.First of all, give him no work until understanding his fault >>First of all, don\'t give him work until he realizes his fault.Second, to make matters worse, fire him from my work field >>Second, to make matters worse, fire him from work. >>Second, to make matters worse, fire him from the workfield.beause it likes virus, even if he works well, he makes perverse affect to relative people >>This can be likened to a virus where even if he works well, he still affects other people perversely.I think I agree to use Times CALL material teaching >>I think I agree with the usage of TIMESCALL in our classes.use under is better >>Using this is better [than the Korean Times, itself,] because the articles featured here are also available in the Korean Times, only sorted out.08-27(

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