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2018-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Writing Exercise: Are there any parts of the city where you live which you are afraid to visit after dark? Where? Why? Explain your answer. Answer: I live in Gyeong-nam where is nearby mountain. Almost all mountains don't have a street lamp. Here too. when i leave home at night I can't see anything, because of dark. So, I want to avoid to leave my home at night, actually, without driving a car. Sometimes I feel a bleak atmosphere and get goose bumps. The dark makes me a coward.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Jun!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night!

Enjoy your holiday! ^^

I live in Gyeong-nam where is nearby mountain.
>> I live in Gyeong-nam and it is situated near the mountains.

Almost all mountains don\'t have a street lamp.

>> Almost all mountains don\'t have street lamps.

Here too.
>> Here, too.

when i leave home at night I can\'t see anything, because of dark.
>> When I leave home at night, I can\'t see anything because it\'s dark.

So, I want to avoid to leave my home at night, actually, without driving a car.
>> So, I don\'t want to leave home at night if I am not driving a car.

Sometimes I feel a bleak atmosphere and get goose bumps.
>> Sometimes, I feel a bleak atmosphere and get goose bumps.

The dark makes me a coward.

>> The darkness makes me a coward.

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